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An acoustic/ambient song based on the premise of feeling disconnected from an environment of materialism, which tends to neglect pieces of itself(people) that don't facilitate the images or ends it pursues. As a "Band-Aid" society, we tend to look for quick, superficial ways of fixing deeply-rooted societal issues (ie. addiction, poverty, homelessness)...
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Lyrics
this garden aint my home
aint picking up the phone
I'll stand for miles away
aint coming back to stay

woke up between the songs
been sleeping for so long
narcotic, seamless sheets
hiding me in a dream

plant over
weeds and growing unadorned
plant over
money healing cuts too deep
pull over
dirt that crumbles, hands are sore
roll over
burried in our endless sleep

I walk a TV street
glowing too bright to see
the channels won't turn back
onto the life I've had

repeat chorus.
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Comments: 5
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Plays: 246
Downloads: 96
Votes: 2
Uploaded: Oct 18, 2007 - 02:10:47 PM
Last Updated: Oct 18, 2007 - 02:33:32 PM Last Played: Jun 26, 2017 - 02:25:21 AM
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Hardware:
MacBook, M-Audio fasttrack pro USB soundcard, and KRK RP-5 monitors
Software:
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Comments
said 3594 days ago (October 18th, 2007)
Welcome To MacJams !
Man this is a great song, the recording really clear and the mixing in the 1st class. Loved your vocal so much and the music composition with the background is very very fine ! Very great song to start your work here at MJ. Welcome to MacJams and looking forward to hear more !

Take Care
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Yeman Auf Al-Rawi
PAGESofSTASIS said 3594 days ago (October 18th, 2007)
thanks very much
I appreciate the kind feedback. MJ seems to be a great place to host songs...very open and supportive.
Check out my latest song called Garden of Even (complete)
psexnyc said 3594 days ago (October 18th, 2007)
Love the sound of the Acoustic
I'm actually jealous of the sound you got out of your acoustic. All the sounds you put together here are quite clear and blend so well together in the mix. Very nice! I'm gonna have to download this into my ipod now!
Check out my latest song called A Matter Of Trust
PAGESofSTASIS said 3594 days ago (October 18th, 2007)
thanks man
to be really honest, I recorded all the live audio for this song using the built-in mic of my macbook. I was only going to use the initial stuff I recorded as scratch tracks until I was able to get my new sound card, but I was astounded at how OK the recording quality was so I kept it. I did two identical guitar tracks and panned them hard L and R, I usually like the sound I get out of this.


Check out my latest song called Garden of Even (complete)
psexnyc said 3594 days ago (October 19th, 2007)
I Do The Same Thing!!
I too record my acoustic live using only the little, tiny mic opening on my eMac. Panning L and then re-record Panning R...That's how you're getting that sound?? I'm gonna try that. I got another all acoustic song playing around my head that I gotta get out. Do you record your vocals the same way too? I use the same tiny, little mic opening to do my vocals.
Check out my latest song called A Matter Of Trust
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