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My Ring (MJRF)


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MyFakeIdentity

 Genre: Trip Hop

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I made a cover of ic42's song "maru 0x01" http://www.macjams.com/song/45851

Of course, it's in 5/4, I adore 5/4.

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Lyrics
My Ring

hold me - in our numbered days
setting off alarms
hear them ring

stay free - party on all day
summer breezes warm
we all sing

shimmering flame
never the same
circling frame
sharing our name

tell me - through the purple haze
hold me in your arms
everything
Song Stats
Hits: 3674
Comments: 51
Fans: 21
Plays: 121
Downloads: 109
Votes: 3
Uploaded: Feb 05, 2009 - 12:36:41 PM
Last Updated: Feb 07, 2009 - 10:50:30 PM Last Played: Aug 12, 2017 - 08:46:25 PM
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Comments
awigze said 3182 days ago (February 5th, 2009)
MyFakeIdentity
I like the way this song moves and flows.... it goes somewhere and maintains interest with the vocals and key changes !!! I like it!


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MyFakeIdentity said 3173 days ago (February 14th, 2009)
changes
I wanted to find several ways to display the beauty of ic42's melody.
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ic42 said 3182 days ago (February 5th, 2009)
discover
perhaps it is a cover? however, it is more like a beautiful quilt, created from a simple pattern. it is re-created, it is re-cycled. it is transformed into a work of art here. so many new ideas now, so many new directions. words in circles, singing in circles, music in circles. it is dizzy, intricate, intimate. you have created what i cannot create. it is an offering of beauty, from a heart of beauty. words are short and meaningful, like haiku. please accept so many humble thank you words and feelings. it is exciting to see such detail in work. thank you for so much work from a small ring.
-hakucho

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MyFakeIdentity said 3178 days ago (February 9th, 2009)
cover
I was happy to be given the chance to recycle your song.
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lavalamp said 3182 days ago (February 5th, 2009)
Very Clean
You know that I love how you do the vocals. Excellent production. Adventurous song.

Love the twists and turns.

Utterly entertaining. Would to hear you work with ledebutant.

Dave
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MyFakeIdentity said 3173 days ago (February 14th, 2009)
collaboration
Maybe I should ask her? Maybe you could let her know?
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Feter said 3182 days ago (February 5th, 2009)
My Ring
Beside your awesome vocal work ..your thoughtful arrangment to this
kind of music is so brilliant ...thnx alot for sharin !!!!
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MyFakeIdentity said 3173 days ago (February 14th, 2009)
thnx
I'm happy you enjoyed this song. ic42's melody is wonderful.
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egobandit said 3182 days ago (February 5th, 2009)
Great arrangement
solid beats and a lovely voice you cant go wrong. Some very interesting ways that you weave the piano . took ic42 and turned it on its head!
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MyFakeIdentity said 3173 days ago (February 14th, 2009)
inspiration
ic42's song was an inspiration for me.
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LunaTrick said 3181 days ago (February 5th, 2009)
I really like this...
It's an odd amalgam of shoegaze, ethereal, and the scando bands like Mum and Sigur Ros. I especially like the way the vocals are done. I can't praise it enough!
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MyFakeIdentity said 3173 days ago (February 14th, 2009)
shoegaze?
Odd is good. Being slightly off lets one see the world in new ways.
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rsorensen said 3181 days ago (February 6th, 2009)
this is great
really love the BG vocals on this. beautiful arrangement.
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MyFakeIdentity said 3173 days ago (February 14th, 2009)
vocals
I'm still learning how to set vocals. It's hard to do.
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Kicbal said 3181 days ago (February 6th, 2009)
Engaging
I like the clean production. There is a lot going on throughout the length of the song but we are still allowed to take our time as each new element and segment develops. Some unusual vocal melodies make for and intriguing listen. Nice stuff. Would actually love to hear some expanded lyrics.
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MyFakeIdentity said 3173 days ago (February 14th, 2009)
expanded lyrics
The lyrics were restricted to be like a haiku. But I'm also not sure I could have come up with anything else without ruining the focus.
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Char said 3181 days ago (February 6th, 2009)
Sweetheart,...
your main voicing is lilting. The tinkling is bright and lovely. That machine/child-like voice on shimmering flame and in other places is unexpected and makes it s-o-o interesting. What an inventive treatment of one of ic42's most inscrutable pieces. It rings beautifully. Thanks, both of you.
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MyFakeIdentity said 3173 days ago (February 14th, 2009)
shimmering
I suspect I have begun to have a split personality. I hope it will pass. Where will I end up? We'll see.
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sloparts said 3181 days ago (February 6th, 2009)
Nice song development
I starts out simply and just keeps building. Ni use of textures in sound. Love the vox on this as well. Very cool to hear something in 5/4 time.

Excellent pice of work

Ed
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MyFakeIdentity said 3178 days ago (February 9th, 2009)
5/4
I simply adore 5/4.
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lengold said 3181 days ago (February 6th, 2009)
Brilliant
Cheers
Len


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MyFakeIdentity said 3173 days ago (February 14th, 2009)
Cheers
I am glad you enjoyed me.
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SmokeyVW said 3181 days ago (February 6th, 2009)
shimmering
what can i say?

i guess you won't be needing me any more.

thanks
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MyFakeIdentity said 3178 days ago (February 9th, 2009)
no
Not at all. I look forward to doing another one with you.
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davisamerica said 3180 days ago (February 7th, 2009)
please
keep the VW around .. Vocals on this are tops as always. 5/4 fits you. Len Gold ... "Brilliant" ... agree. Pity no D/L
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MyFakeIdentity said 3178 days ago (February 9th, 2009)
Download
Downloading is enabled. It has a brand new icon!
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davisamerica said 3177 days ago (February 10th, 2009)
and
thanks for the note ... d/l .... arrgggh new buttons
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abfkingsport said 3180 days ago (February 7th, 2009)
ABFkingsport
The ring has come full circle. Great mix. Love the changes. Keyboarding is exceptional.
Anthony
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MyFakeIdentity said 3173 days ago (February 14th, 2009)
full circle
ic42 began the cycle. I really like his round melody and made this out of it.
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Skean said 3179 days ago (February 8th, 2009)
Love it
Thanks
---
Kenta
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MyFakeIdentity said 3173 days ago (February 14th, 2009)
love you
love you too
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Skean said 3172 days ago (February 15th, 2009)
:D
:D)
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blaky smith said 3178 days ago (February 9th, 2009)
5 / 4
I like your music, original and very creative, always with an excellent production... Bravo !
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MyFakeIdentity said 3173 days ago (February 14th, 2009)
5/4
If you like 5/4, try some of my other songs. They are all in 5/4 or grouped in fives.
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mikkinylund said 3178 days ago (February 9th, 2009)
I haven't heard you before
But this is great. Very light, clean, very good vocals.
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MyFakeIdentity said 3173 days ago (February 14th, 2009)
haven't heard before
I'm glad you found my song. I have a few other ones that you might like.
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mvh9591 said 3178 days ago (February 9th, 2009)
Nice_______

Enjoyed - however, The mid break may have been a bit long. (Almost lost interest) Your music and singing are nice but there may have been just a bit too much delay on the vocal. Sorry if I seem a bit critical. (just trying to help)

I truly enjoyed - Thanks for sharing,

mvh : )
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mvh9591 said 3178 days ago (February 9th, 2009)
Long_______

One other thing - Song is to long - My personal opinion.

Thanks again for sharing,

mvh : )
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MyFakeIdentity said 3173 days ago (February 14th, 2009)
too much
Don't feel sorry for sharing your criticism - it's OK and welcome.

The song length was what it needed to be to express all my ideas. But I will keep this in mind next time. But the echoes are my thing. That won't change.
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bud said 3178 days ago (February 9th, 2009)
Loved the break - hung on the spaces
and the slow development of the rhythm. Wonderfully creative piece - excellent reinterpretation.
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MyFakeIdentity said 3173 days ago (February 14th, 2009)
development
ic42's original song invites reinterpretation. Give it a try! You'll like it.
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HenriROGERsoloandbands said 3177 days ago (February 10th, 2009)
Chorus

Nice vocals ideas . The chorus is very creative.
The song needs a better building .
Keep the most creative parts with the vocals , less instrumental parts .
MyFakeIdentity said 3173 days ago (February 14th, 2009)
better building
Oh well, I wanted more instrumental parts. It was meant to be trip hop or something after all. But I'm glad you liked it enough to have commented.
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guitapick said 3177 days ago (February 10th, 2009)
The middle section...
...is just so cool...minimal and keeps you going onto the A section, again...very nice
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MyFakeIdentity said 3173 days ago (February 14th, 2009)
minimal
I live for this kind of thing. I wish I had time to make more music like this.
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bug67 said 3175 days ago (February 12th, 2009)
Thanks
Thank you for posting this. I had a lot of fun listening to it. I guess I need to go and hear the original, eh?
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MyFakeIdentity said 3173 days ago (February 14th, 2009)
hear the original
Please do listen to the original. I really like it. I ran off in a different direction since I only know how to do one style.
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sonnyjim said 3172 days ago (February 15th, 2009)
Late Night Driving Music
On an old highway at the extreme edge of habitation.
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MyFakeIdentity said 3068 days ago (May 30th, 2009)
Oops
I just saw your comment. On the edge? Yeah, I can understand that.
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Sir Bass said 3068 days ago (May 30th, 2009)
Hot
You did your thang on this one. 5/4 is where it's at. My 5/4 is no match for this one.
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MyFakeIdentity said 3068 days ago (May 30th, 2009)
No way
I don't agree. Your 5/4 WiLd cHiLd is a great groove.
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