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The Storm


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tmcfate

 Genre: Acoustic

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so i wrote this 3 weeks ago. i quit smoking 14 days ago. as i listened back to it tonight i thought, it might have been influenced by my feeling at the time when i was struggling with when i was going to quit. it had been bothering me for a while. so i thought it interesting. i often dont know why i am writing a certain song, or at least i think i might be writing one song to find out it is really about something else. i love that about creating something.
tim
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Lyrics
flowers that i have grown from seed surround me
no lesson could be harder for me to see

im walking in the graveyard
im sitting down by a tree
i crossed that river yesterday baby
what more do you want from me

long roads are long sometimes hard to swallow
and deep waters deep
when you sink i just follow

im losing something precious
something tattered and torn
say goodbye to the sunshine
im headed into a storm

getting lost infers someone has to find you
but when you find your way out yourself
it is called losing your direction
nobody wants to believe it
no one thought they ever could

i i im driving down the highway
i i i i aint looking back
just meet me in the morning
just before i wake

dont lose something precious
something so tattered and worn
keep me in the sunshine
and shelter me from the storm

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Comments: 16
Fans: 7
Plays: 188
Downloads: 85
Votes: 1
Uploaded: Aug 04, 2009 - 09:40:38 PM
Last Updated: Sep 09, 2010 - 09:48:32 PM Last Played: Mar 12, 2017 - 05:50:15 PM
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Comments
crissew said 2971 days ago (August 4th, 2009)
Psychedelic
Very cool. Almost Floyd meets Beatles. Dark and introverted. Very creative, nice work.
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tmcfate said 2971 days ago (August 4th, 2009)
thanks
thank you it means a lot to get feedback
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crissew said 2971 days ago (August 4th, 2009)
Psychedelic
Very cool. Almost Floyd meets Beatles. Dark and introverted. Very creative, nice work.
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blamm said 2971 days ago (August 4th, 2009)
Great production
Love the song, but the production made me listen a second time. Love the mix of dark lyrics with the bright production. I like how you mix it up when the drums kick in.
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Feter said 2971 days ago (August 5th, 2009)
The Storm
Tim this is very nice ....wonderful vocal ..fits
the deep lyrics ...the piano hold a big passion .
very nice arranging ..thnx alot for sharin !!!!
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lavalamp said 2971 days ago (August 5th, 2009)
Quirky..that's a good thing
Very original tune. Very interesting production. I like the variation you have on this track. A little Mick J in your voice

I quit smoking over 2 years ago. You have to keep it up. Believe it will get better. Remember it's easier not doing something than doing something.

LL
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tmcfate said 2971 days ago (August 5th, 2009)
thanks
i here ya
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MarkHolbrook said 2971 days ago (August 5th, 2009)
Congrats
on quitting Tim... I love the heart feel of this... The vocals are amazingly dripping with emotion. Great tune my friend... Sounds excellent!
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egobandit said 2970 days ago (August 5th, 2009)
tops
I love the soft and looseness in the arrangement, the singing and lyrics are outstanding, also great use of the strings. Like when it get to the drum part and theres a rumble like thunder in the background a great addition to the powerfull performance. Excellent all around I wish I could download this when I get my mac back its the first thing Im going to do!
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dantimmermans said 2970 days ago (August 6th, 2009)
the synth is just right
and this is a great tune. i love the desperate quality of your voice adn the general mood. I'd lose the timpani rolls, though.
great tone on the lead guitar, very simply and delicately played.
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sheilad said 2969 days ago (August 6th, 2009)
enjoyed
so much I sent it to the links! Love your vocals! Faved & d/l
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tmcfate said 2969 days ago (August 6th, 2009)
thanks
really fast response . i totally appreciate your listening
tim
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abfkingsport said 2969 days ago (August 6th, 2009)
ABFkingsport
Absolutely love this. You have another fan. Excellent lyrics perfectly performed. DL'ed thanks for sharing.
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tmcfate said 2969 days ago (August 6th, 2009)
most welcome
thank you. i always feel good when i make another fan. i will give you a listen as well
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lengold said 2965 days ago (August 11th, 2009)
Another very
creative and very listenable song - great production.
Cheers
Len

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michaelkoppenheffer said 2809 days ago (January 14th, 2010)
you've got a really mature sense
of your sound (and I don't mean "old"): having listened to a couple of your tunes in a row, I'm really impressed by the depth of your vision and the authenticity of your execution. Another really nice song!
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