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holding sunshine


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tmcfate

 Genre: Acoustic

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the three has turned into four. all really about the same thing.
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Lyrics
you saw me standing by your river
you watched me do what i do
you wondered what i was thinking
thats when i started
started to tell you

i know you fell out of your heaven
i saw you climb up in a tree
i watched you walk across the desert
i saw you looking straight at me
you were holding the sunshine way above your head

i had a dream we both had nothing to say
we kissed by a window
outside was a beautiful day
we walked back down to the river
and we floated away
we watched the moon from the water

i had the dream i was dreaming again

are you my home town
are you a river on its way
have you been waiting in the desert
watching the sky and what it might say
i saw you, saw you with the sunshine
you were holding that sunshine way above your head.
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Comments: 13
Fans: 12
Plays: 234
Downloads: 87
Votes: 1
Uploaded: Dec 27, 2009 - 12:03:10 PM
Last Updated: Feb 01, 2011 - 11:42:11 PM Last Played: Nov 03, 2017 - 03:52:46 PM
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Comments
ktb said 2887 days ago (December 27th, 2009)
holding sunshin
warm and lucious. thought you did a great job on the vocal. like the change up in the effects, and backing voice especially. nice production accents incorporating the piano and glistening like bell synth.
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Feter said 2887 days ago (December 27th, 2009)
holding sunshine
This is so comforting ..a glance of sea shore ..
the set done something magic there your vocal
work is astounding here ..very deep and airy ..
the use of the oboe is incredible behind ..very
nice arrangement my friend ..very cool production
kudos ...thnx alot for sharin !!!!
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Bob6stringer said 2887 days ago (December 27th, 2009)
Perfectly lazy in its slow bloom.
A Quadlogy? I loved Something's happened to me. I get an old Stones-ish laziness in the last one and this one in the way they take their time to roll-out and bloom; and the near-equality i the mix of the almost-lead 2nd vocal. (Early stones--they've been a completely postmodern bad-musical joke since about 1972 IMHO.) You're certainly having some fun with ambient swhooshy noises and chimes. They enhance more than distract. Interesting how you decide to go the nolow-reverb route. I might've wet them down and lowered their volume a bit... choices aplenty. Good ones here.
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jiguma said 2887 days ago (December 27th, 2009)
NY meets slow Stones
Very nicely done - I'd probably knock a little 'verb off the vocal, but that's just a personal preference, and many would disagree.
I like the chimes a lot (and the "swoshy things". Nice recording and good playing/singing. Lyrically interesting and it sets a mood for sure.
N
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sloparts said 2887 days ago (December 27th, 2009)
Lets try that again,
I made some comments on this song, but being the old geezer I am, I forgot to hit the post button. Oh well, it's tough to get old and senile.

Anyway, basically what I said was the this has a nice easy laid back kind of feel to it that I like.

Bob6 pointed me in your direction, and now I'm glad he did. I love the song, and the soft relaxed way you put this together. Instead of rushing to get the listener "there", you just slowly and gently bring the listened into the song to be carried along with you in the performance.

I tend to agree with Bob6 on the mix and his comment on the second vocal, but in this song it just seems to work.

Nice piece of work Tim, I really like this one.

Be well and be cool my new friend,

Ed
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guygrooves said 2887 days ago (December 27th, 2009)
I see I am
not the only one who hears an early Stones quality to this. It is so good I had to listen to it all on the music page because I couldn't bring myself to stop it and come to the actual song page. By the time it was done I had to come here and check to see if I could D/L it or at least gush a little. Looks as though I get to do both. This is in the top 5 best songs I have heard on this site.
Peace
Guy
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johnwhitehead said 2887 days ago (December 28th, 2009)
Sunshine
This is gorgeous, Tim. Love the way this unwinds. Wonderful lyrics: "are you my home town
are you a river on its way". And love the sense of spaciousness in the mix. Guitars, keys (Mellotron?), vocs--all just great.


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echoroom said 2886 days ago (December 29th, 2009)
Hey Tim
I've been away awile, but great to come back and hear you. This is a gorgeous tune, lsuh and languid. Great vocal, great lyrics, a real dreamy track - fab.
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lengold said 2885 days ago (December 29th, 2009)
Gorgeous
Feel - I would buy this.
I get the Stones references but would also add the sensitivity of a Van Morrison ensemble.
Downloaded. Thanks.
Cheers
Len

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Vic Holman said 2884 days ago (December 30th, 2009)
a style of all your own
very recognizable style Tim.

great tune and the production and sweet. the subtle touches are a nice topping on the cake. one of you best to my ears.
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crissew said 2880 days ago (January 3rd, 2010)
holding sunshine
I got a pink floyd type vibe on this myself. There were moments in the chorus that sound a bit like "cant always get what you want" but the overall vibe to me was floydesque. Enjoyed the song, very well done lyrics. Good production
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michaelkoppenheffer said 2869 days ago (January 14th, 2010)
Are you my hometown?
Wow, this song is something! I agree with the commenters about some of the style references and the relaxed unrushed pace, but in listening--this is a terrific song in totality: sonically, lyrically! I can't get over that line "are you my hometown." Great!
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Trillian said 1660 days ago (May 8th, 2013)
Ohhhh! I love this!!!
Puts me in mind of C,S,& N's "Wasted on the Way" and this theme of second chances. (?) You have such a "Way" with getting down to the raw and simple truth. Give me a heads up little flame thingy when you post, Brother. I don't want to miss a "thang" you compose! Loved the video! ~ How do you do the things you do?! Rare Orchids spring from your soul, "Word Man"! : ) btw do you know you look a little like Eric Clapton? Hope you don't feel that's an insult... ;~ }P
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