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All Turns To Mist, with Ralph


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I'm just playing. I took out two lines and replaced them. I've never cut a vocal before. "Ralph" came over so I put him to work.
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Watery flashes
Of blue beyond blue
Tidal wave crashes
Wring truth out of true
Relevant sadness
As changes persist
Remembered fondness
As all turns to mist
>>
That's how I see us
Waves beating a shore
Eroding surface
Unmasking much more
And day will not see
Trials put to rest
You must travel free
And hope for the best
(hope for the best)
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Plays: 89
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Uploaded: May 06, 2010 - 03:35:40 AM
Last Updated: Dec 20, 2012 - 09:19:56 PM Last Played: Jul 15, 2017 - 07:28:55 AM
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PaulaMunk said 2726 days ago (May 6th, 2010)
Aw, Steve!
Thanks for the fav. :)
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alackbass said 2726 days ago (May 6th, 2010)
You're an Original
You're very bold in your approach. I wish I had the guts to try the types of unconventional ideas you thrive on. The techno loop in the back is not something I would have ever heard as matching up with this melody. But what do you know?.........It does, and very nicely at that. I love the lyrics, particularly

Relevant sadness
As changes persist
Remembered fondness
As all turns to mist

Now that's some poetry.
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PaulaMunk said 2726 days ago (May 6th, 2010)
I wanted
something to drive it so I cut up and spliced the beat. I also wanted, very much, to have waves crashing because that is relentless but also dependable. No guts here, just pure ignorance. Ralph was bugging me. It is his fault. :)
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RAVENS said 2726 days ago (May 6th, 2010)
Wonderful
What beautiful lyrics, and your voice is so terrifically unique. I like the lowered vocal double, works so well. Crashing waves seal the deal. Awesome!

RAVEN ;-)
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PaulaMunk said 2726 days ago (May 6th, 2010)
You
are sweet to take the time to listen to my meager offerings when there are such fabulous pieces here. I'm just trying out things and posting for a record of what I've done. I'm happy you liked it. Thanks. :)
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DWL said 2726 days ago (May 6th, 2010)
Interesting piece
Works amazingly well. Pretty far out stuff. Could be hip jazz club in the 60s.

Too cool man.

Cheers

Dick
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PaulaMunk said 2726 days ago (May 6th, 2010)
There's
a poet in here somewhere. Yes, I wanted it to be jazzy and vocally driven. I still am far from making any real music. Grateful for the listen, Dick. :)
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Ex_Silentio said 2726 days ago (May 6th, 2010)
Truth out of true
There's wisdom in your words. So, Ralph, huh? And I suppose you're Alice? So, this is very catchy. Why not ramp it up into a full-blown techno dance number? I'm serious.
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PaulaMunk said 2726 days ago (May 6th, 2010)
I know
you are serious. I'm seriously ill equipped. Maybe, after several years of trial and error, I'll have some grasp of how to do that. Thanks, Ex. That is very encouraging. :)
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awigze said 2726 days ago (May 6th, 2010)
Ralph
the live in, eh? cool idea.
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PaulaMunk said 2726 days ago (May 6th, 2010)
Yeah
its almost as if Ralph is in my head. I do the best I can. Thanks. :)
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maxruehl said 2726 days ago (May 6th, 2010)
Glad
to see you're still plugging away, Char--even if I'm not.:)
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PaulaMunk said 2726 days ago (May 6th, 2010)
Oh, Yeah
I'm trying really hard..to break GB again. Hang in there, sweetie. :)
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MarkHolbrook said 2726 days ago (May 6th, 2010)
Is cool!
PM... You have it goin on!
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PaulaMunk said 2726 days ago (May 6th, 2010)
Right..
I'm going straight to the looney bin. I only post if I think it is halfway decent. I'm very careful of Ralph's feelings. He doesn't get out much. :)
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RobLeBanc said 2726 days ago (May 6th, 2010)
Strange
...and Wonderful! I'm always a sucker for some cool sound FX, but the real gem of this song is its lyrics, truly deep and thoughtful, the vox are really great as well, enjoyed this very much!
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PaulaMunk said 2725 days ago (May 7th, 2010)
I can't do much
on my own so I do things like this. Thank you for thinking it was okay. :)
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damiengh said 2724 days ago (May 8th, 2010)
Creative
Way to go Char, pretty creative stuff. For some reason, this brings back a bit of the 50/60's for me, of those old teen love movies, you know like Sandra Dee stuff. Would like to hear this with some bass or the full work-up like others have suggested.
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PaulaMunk said 2723 days ago (May 9th, 2010)
Well, now
I couldn't have done it, but Reggie Pole revamped this and it is version II, on Char's page. I see the Gidget vibe, probably because of my voice. I hope you like the new one. :)
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Alannah said 2724 days ago (May 8th, 2010)
I like the .....
... accompanying male vocal as well .... interesting use of the water works .... so glad to see you are playing with GB more and more ... now I need to get back to it myself .....
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PaulaMunk said 2723 days ago (May 9th, 2010)
Thank you
for liking my experiment. And, for also enjoying how it became so much more. :)
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