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I’ve had asthma all my life. Had 3 major attacks which scared the shit out of me. Anyway, this 3rd attack came while I was fooling around with this main riff in the bathroom. Love the acoustics there :)

This is another long forgotten tryout from my old pc-cubase days. Recently carried it track by track on GaragaBand. It’s not complete and totally here for your valued contributions and collaborations.

I am open to any suggestions, but I have some thoughts: I am willing to record the rhythm guitar and bass parts again. We can reaarange, add parts, etc... But it needs a solo on there. Trumpet, sax or piano is what I have in mind. Maybe dueling solos between two intruments. Preferably in a chaotic manner regarding the asthma attack feeling. I tried with a lead with guiar but didn’t like the feeling. But anyway I don’t want to put any limitations. Just need a solo. Feel free to comment and contribute. And finally, there just two drum loops on there. Anyone in for a drum replacement?
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Uploaded: Jun 16, 2011 - 06:31:58 AM
Last Updated: Jun 18, 2011 - 07:39:34 AM Last Played: Apr 12, 2017 - 12:21:30 AM
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gadzooks said 2291 days ago (June 16th, 2011)
Asthma!
Hey, this is real funky. Just love the groove. I can really here a solo. I could here a rippin' guitar with sustain ... a fusion Jeff Beck solo taking off . But a horn would be cool or a B3? Anyway, great groove!
SG
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WeatherReport said 2289 days ago (June 18th, 2011)
Thanks...
...for the comment. A jazzy horn or/with keyboard is what I have on my mind. I've tried the guitar and didn't like it. But really wouldn't mind a try with the guitar. Or a guitar dueling with a horn. What do you say? We could figure out something for an alternate take also.
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magnatone said 2291 days ago (June 16th, 2011)
Asthma
Hi Murat - you might consider listing the genre here as "open collaborations" if you're looking for people to work with this very cool song - you're likely to get more responses and offers to participate that way. this is terrific, i'll be watching to see how it develops with much interest. very happy to have you at MJ!
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WeatherReport said 2289 days ago (June 18th, 2011)
Thanks...
...for the comment. Will try to do what you suggest. I'm still learning to find my way around the site you know. Thanks.
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TobinMueller said 2291 days ago (June 16th, 2011)
Frenetic funk groove
Cool groove, definitely waiting for solos over it. I dug the frenetic energy, the near desperation. I think a screaming electric guitar lead would be best. Or sax (tenor or alto). Something dirty. Nice start, tho.
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WeatherReport said 2289 days ago (June 18th, 2011)
Thanks...
for stopping by and taking interest. Something dirty is what I have in mind also. Any sax players you would suggest?
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davisamerica said 2291 days ago (June 16th, 2011)
ya know
...Sigmund or PickQuickRecords could wail on guitar in this ... you ought to drop them a line. Man...i am totally loving your work.
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WeatherReport said 2289 days ago (June 18th, 2011)
Thanks...
...for your interest and comment. Will do a search for your suggestions. Glad you liked it.
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J_Gretch said 2291 days ago (June 16th, 2011)
Asthma
Man this has potential...I'm thinking a little back and forth with guitar and sax might work well here.

Did you ever listen to "Edgar Winter and White Trash"?...That one live record"Roadwork" had Rick Derringer,and Johnny Winter on guitars, and Edgar blowing Sax.


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WeatherReport said 2289 days ago (June 18th, 2011)
Thanks...
Roadwork was in my archives. But I never got to listen to it carefully. I now get what you mean after giving it an ear. That combination would be perfect.
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SISTERS said 2291 days ago (June 16th, 2011)
hot stuff
this fires all my rockets. i LOVE your caffeinated funky groove.
change in key - clever little jump there.
keep breathing, brother - cuz i am definitely a new rabid fan of your work! anne
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WeatherReport said 2289 days ago (June 18th, 2011)
Thanks...
Anne for your kind word. It was just basically one chord structure, just to make it easy for a melody or solo to go along. Still a draft but want to go ahead and finish it. Thanks again for your interest.
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alackbass said 2291 days ago (June 16th, 2011)
Asthma!
MURAT! Another example of your blazing guitar and bass work!
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WeatherReport said 2289 days ago (June 18th, 2011)
Thanks...
Andrew, I'm really glad to hear you liked it.
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RAVENS said 2290 days ago (June 17th, 2011)
Terrific
Wow, this is awesome! Love your playing, it's funky & grooves smoothly. I hope someone takes you up of your offer, "dueling solos" would be a great addition! Hope you're in better health these days.

RAVEN ;-)
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WeatherReport said 2289 days ago (June 18th, 2011)
Thanks...
..very much for your best wishes. Well there's nothing to do but try to live with it. But I'm ok for years and taking good care of me. Glad you liked it.
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ShadowofNine said 2290 days ago (June 17th, 2011)
WeatherReport
Not the best name you could have chosen but the funk is nice...
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WeatherReport said 2289 days ago (June 18th, 2011)
Thanks...
As a big fan of WR and having almost no experience on socializing on the net, I never took a nick name in any circumstance. While filling out the form, (and not sure of what to expect from MJ) that came first to mind. And really feel stupid now to name myself after them. At least I don't sound like them (which for me is impossible anyhow)
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Lightman- said 2277 days ago (June 30th, 2011)
Great
I like this riff... I also like the funky guitar.... Good tune....
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falcef said 2277 days ago (June 30th, 2011)
Asthma!
A Goup Band with sounds beauty. Very Nice great song execution perfect Funky. Bye from Italy
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FEEL said 2277 days ago (June 30th, 2011)
Love the upbeat rythem
And man! The Guitar is awsome. Thanks for sharing.
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Name: MURAT KILICCI
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I'm from Istanbul. I play guitar and bass, but can't say which one I like or play better. I've been playing guitar in rock bands and bass guitar in funk/jazz bands. My professional career as a copywriter takes most of my time. So I try to record ... [see more]

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