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Intangible w Reggie Pole, improved version 2


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Char

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A collaborative effort between MJ alumnus Reggie Pole and me, wherein he transmogrified my original set of lyrics for Intangible. This is, in fact, an enhanced version of the original posted on Mr. Pole's page before his virtual demise. He left instructions that I should re-post after a sufficient period of time.
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Lyrics
How do I explain myself right now
How can you get my point of view
I'm invisible, inaudible
I'm intangible to you

I have been trying to let you know
I have been reaching out for years
I have watched you from the shadow place
In a storm cloud drowned by tears

I walk around like a ghostly thing
That no one can see, hear, or touch
I leave traces of myself behind
That you don't recognize as such

Guess you're too busy with your life
And you're too focused just on you
You don't see, hear, or touch me
You haven't got a single clue

I'm so lonely, left all alone
You go on without a care
I'm so tied to your history
I'm like that old suit you wear

I have no way to move on from here
I am the ghost of your past
You've locked me up tight in your mind
No reflection do I cast

I'm invisible, inaudible
I'm just intangible to you
Song Stats
Hits: 4109
Comments: 118
Fans: 44
Plays: 337
Downloads: 67

Uploaded: Jan 04, 2012 - 11:48:17 PM
Last Updated: Jan 05, 2012 - 12:05:36 AM Last Played: Jul 19, 2017 - 05:57:01 AM
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Comments
Les_Kloo said 2150 days ago (January 5th, 2012)
Progpopambientblues
Yowza, in my humble opinion. Really great to hear you fronting the "big sound." One of your best. This Reggie guy ... meh ... but you are superb. Keep rockin'.
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Char said 2150 days ago (January 5th, 2012)
Say what
you will about Reggie. He will be an example of sartorial splendor and youthful adventure to me, forever. He was one of my first friends on MJ.
I am so humbled by talent such as his and yours, too. Hell, yes, I will keep doing what I can and keep depending upon the real musicians to make something as unique as this song became with the little I give them. Thank you so much. :)
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DWL said 2150 days ago (January 5th, 2012)
Free form Char!
Really interesting piece of work.

Not so much rock as experimental.

Reminds me a little of Patti Smith, which is no bad thing :-)

Cheers

Dick


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Char said 2149 days ago (January 5th, 2012)
I agree
that this is experimental but RP called it rock. I'm sure you came by, Dick, when RP had the first version. Thank you for the repeat visit and the compliment. I'm just glad the song made it back to MJ. Thank you. :)
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tokai said 2150 days ago (January 5th, 2012)
Reg V Char
I am glad this has been resurrected, great job, such a cool song. Char you are soaring on this, one of your best I feel. This place would never be the same now we are Reg_Less.
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Char said 2149 days ago (January 5th, 2012)
Oh yeah,
me too! Who could've guessed that lyrics inspired by a Mr. West could've become a dozen different songs. I must have done something right. (Even a blind chipmunk finds a nut, now and then.) I'm lucky. I have two collabs with RP. Thanks for coming back to hear this once again. :)
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richard13 said 2150 days ago (January 5th, 2012)
Whew!
Some heavy duty rock and some heavy duty lyrics. I don't think I heard the original; did you remix? Good job.
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Char said 2149 days ago (January 5th, 2012)
I believe
RP added some and dialed down some. I, as usual, did nothing new. Thank you, Richard. :)
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Jarvoid said 2150 days ago (January 5th, 2012)
some nice stuff going
on here....very cool and interesting....does have a prog rock feel to it as well.....which is always good by me....

Jarvoid
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Char said 2149 days ago (January 5th, 2012)
You betcha!
Reggie let out all the stops. I love it. And, thank you. :)
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magnatone said 2150 days ago (January 5th, 2012)
Intangible
wow char, you sound spectacular here, and mr. pole's work is superb. it's very sad about his demise, but i'm thinking you might check out mr. kloo as i think he might have some similar skills for future collab efforts. whoever you collab with is fortunate indeed! seriously, this is terrific - congrats to you both!
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Char said 2149 days ago (January 5th, 2012)
I've
been fortunate to interest actual musicians in my stuff. Mr. Kloo strikes me as a solitary kind of guy but anything can happen. It is nice to have this one back. I'm grateful you came by once more. Thank you, Karen. :)
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gadzooks said 2150 days ago (January 5th, 2012)
Intangible
Very nice collab ... enjoyed!
SG
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Char said 2149 days ago (January 5th, 2012)
Yes?
It is unusual and prominently so. Glad you liked it, Stan. Many thanks.
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drakonis said 2149 days ago (January 5th, 2012)
color me quarky!
up or down, this is sub-liminal, and super-cool (about -272k.) What a wild singing punch, Char... you hold your own here just fine, and given Reggie's awesome backing, that's some collab. Kudos to you-does!
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Char said 2149 days ago (January 5th, 2012)
Why,
thanks for listening to the tune once more. Ah, Reggie was a force to reckon with. I'm so glad he let me bring this new, improved version back. Thanks.
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alackbass said 2149 days ago (January 5th, 2012)
Intangible w Reggie Pole, improved version 2
Great collab! You're at the top of your game here Char! I really miss that Reggie guy. Good thing there's people like Les_Kloo to fill the void.
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Char said 2149 days ago (January 5th, 2012)
I don't know if you
heard the tune when it was on Reggie's page. He had some uber cool stuff. Les_Kloo has many things in common with Reggie but Reggie will always be the better dresser. Thanks.
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racerat said 2149 days ago (January 5th, 2012)
Pole
Rawking guitar at 2:20 and then again at 4:42! OMG, nice.
RR
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Char said 2149 days ago (January 5th, 2012)
The guitar
and wild ass synths that blew you out of your seat...that was Reggie Pole. None of his stuff is for the faint of heart. Glad you enjoyed it. Thank you.
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spitlogic said 2149 days ago (January 5th, 2012)
Very nice
I really enjoyed the backing on this jam. Excellent lyrics too.
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Char said 2149 days ago (January 5th, 2012)
So glad
this tune appeals. Thank you for the compliment. :)
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PatriciaGirl said 2149 days ago (January 6th, 2012)
Vocalicious :)
Wow Char this is great stuff. I love the 80's vibe but it has more than that it-it has your vocal style talent which I always enjoy. The music is sort of a myriad of styles. For me stuff like Duran and Susie to name a few. I'm glad you posted this!

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Char said 2148 days ago (January 6th, 2012)
Gee,
that's very nice, Patty. Oh yeah, this is a mix up but a controlled one. Reggie was very good at that. Thanks.
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karmicfreak said 2149 days ago (January 6th, 2012)
Cool rock song!
I really liked the juxtaposition of the tight rhythm section and the spacey, prog keys. Nice attention to form! Well done.
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Char said 2148 days ago (January 6th, 2012)
What you
like is Reggie Pole's forte. Thank you very much.
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megus said 2148 days ago (January 6th, 2012)
Nice
Good vocals and I really like the guitar. I'll have to check out the original.
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Char said 2148 days ago (January 7th, 2012)
The first version
was on Reggie's page and it is no longer here. What is here is a different vocal and several different versions of music..the "Intangibles". It was a kick to have so many collaborations from one idea. Thank you.
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J_Gretch said 2148 days ago (January 7th, 2012)
Intangible w Reggie Pole, improved version 2
Wow!...This is impressive.I like the way the lead accopliment matches the pitch of your voice now and then,and the overall placement of the vox in the mix spot-on...My fav part my be at the 5:30 mark where it goes kind of bluesy,,,Enjoyed it much!....Great job Char.
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Char said 2148 days ago (January 7th, 2012)
I sang
it in kind of a bluesy manner. Reggie is the only one who got my one take and first trial at the lyrics. Yeah, I like what he added, too. It is relentless. Thank you.
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lavalamp said 2148 days ago (January 7th, 2012)
Audio art
Dig the vibe!

LL
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Char said 2148 days ago (January 7th, 2012)
I appreciate
you're coming to listen once more. I'm sure you heard this when it was first posted. I was so excited to have people add to my song. Thanks so much.
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Bowman said 2148 days ago (January 7th, 2012)
Organic and sultry.
Love the way this song progresses. Great work and this is certainly one of your strongest works Char.
Cheers,
Charlie
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Char said 2145 days ago (January 10th, 2012)
Hi, Charlie,
It is mostly Reggie Pole's vision with a bit of my cluelessness. It is a kick in the pants kind of journey for me where I just sat back while he stoked the furnace. I love this place. Thank you.
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neilh79 said 2148 days ago (January 7th, 2012)
Intangible
Interesting concept here Char, really enjoyed it, kind of an alternative dance club vibe well done
Char said 2147 days ago (January 8th, 2012)
Truly,
I only put a so so thingy out there and I was lucky to get back a dozen different musical flights of daring, this one...being the first awesome re-arrangement I had. So glad you liked it. Thanks.
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grah3am said 2146 days ago (January 8th, 2012)
I aint afraid of no ghost
... but this does sound spooky. Downloaded and added to my tomb of Pole recordings.
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PaulaMunk said 2146 days ago (January 8th, 2012)
Hah, hah!
Me neither. I don't mind visitations from the Outer Pole. There is no one who does this wild mix like he does. Thanks.
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dave_b said 2146 days ago (January 9th, 2012)
Intangible
Cool lyrics. Your vibrato stands up to the heavy prog rock backer which is brilliant btw. Great collab!
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Char said 2146 days ago (January 9th, 2012)
It's a pretty
cool song because of all of reggification. Glad you liked it. Thank you.
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Doug Somers said 2145 days ago (January 9th, 2012)
Intangible
You have a lot of energy for this one Char - a lot more free form and trippy than our last collab :) Your emotional vocal is dialed way up to 11 and Mr. Pole's contribution is not exactly holding anything back either.

Nice collab m'lady.

Take care,
Doug

PS - where did RP go? I was clearly out when he left the building.
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Char said 2145 days ago (January 9th, 2012)
I think Reggie
went into a sonic phone booth and came out as a new mage, around the end of June. He tweaked this and thought enough of it to let me re-post it. I'm glad it is back. The other Intangibles use the second group of lyrics so this one is unique. Can we make a free form Celtic number, I wonder? Thank you for your support.
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Doug Somers said 2145 days ago (January 9th, 2012)
Dirges are kind of free form
but are a little less energetic due to the circumstances of their use. :) Still, Celtic free form could work....
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rok41 said 2145 days ago (January 10th, 2012)
Intangible
This is super cool...miss RP. You're in great form here Char! Never a dull moment. One of my favs from you.
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Char said 2145 days ago (January 10th, 2012)
My grand
experiment..posting an a capella, yielded a dozen versions. I am happy this one is back in MacJams city. Reggie is here in spirit. Maybe, I can entice him to spellbind another a capella? Wouldn't that be neat? Thank you, Chris.
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Philip18 said 2143 days ago (January 11th, 2012)
Intangible
Compelling music. Love the majestic sound, the plaintive vocal and the soaring guitar and synth lines (assuming there are some guitars and not all synths?). Impressive!
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Char said 2143 days ago (January 12th, 2012)
I believe
there are guitars in there and tons of other stuff. Reggie Pole was really good at wild sounding rock.Thank you.
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TheDean said 2143 days ago (January 12th, 2012)
Hey
Thanks for all the comments. You are a talented singer and I would def be up for a collab.
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Char said 2143 days ago (January 12th, 2012)
I do try.
It is a great kick to hear my words made into songs. Well, lets do something then. Just let me know. You are welcome. And, thank you very much.
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jibes said 2142 days ago (January 12th, 2012)
Intangible
Nothing Intangible about this song! Great!
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Char said 2142 days ago (January 13th, 2012)
Why, thank you.
It is very Reggie Pole. Glad you liked it.
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ShadowofNine said 2142 days ago (January 13th, 2012)
Unique
Awesome rock attitude, expressive drumming and guitar work, vocal shines Bravo
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Char said 2142 days ago (January 13th, 2012)
He really
knows how to bring it. Thank you, Dave. Much appreciated.
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Slashh! said 2142 days ago (January 13th, 2012)
Get it girl!
Very progressive groove you got going Here. Works great with your vocal.
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Char said 2142 days ago (January 13th, 2012)
Reggie is one,
maybe two or three of a kind. I'm lucky he wanted to play with my vocal. Thanks.
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RochaMalhada said 2141 days ago (January 14th, 2012)
Reggie
I really like this, Charlene. I don't know how I missed this before (?)

I wasn't aware you do progressive rock - most excellent.

. - Harold
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Char said 2138 days ago (January 16th, 2012)
You meant
Reggie doing progressive rock, right? I do whatever it is I do. I have been very lucky with my collaborators. He did all the work. Thanks.
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T_Being_esq said 2127 days ago (January 27th, 2012)
Push The Boundaries
We all need to do it more often. You inspire us all.
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Char said 2127 days ago (January 28th, 2012)
So
appreciate your stopping in. I'm glad to have this back on MJ. Thank you.
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abzwork said 2126 days ago (January 28th, 2012)
To Char...
Impressive, lotta fun goin' on...reminds me of White Lion, one of my first tastes of A. Holdsworth...strong composition with difficult lines to negotiate..power lyrics...multi-melodies...ahhhh, so refreshing, my type of journey, a most enjoyable collab...Big Smile City all the way...:):):)peace
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Char said 2126 days ago (January 28th, 2012)
That
you liked it means a great deal to me. I believed I had something with the lyrics but without the music I didn't have much. But for this place I would not have had a taste of what making songs was all about. Thank you.
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Maximum_Lux said 2123 days ago (January 31st, 2012)
Simply Amazing!
This song is just awesome! I love how it changes up, but still somehow keeps the same drive throughout. I don't think I've ever heard anything quite like this...thanks for the download!
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Char said 2123 days ago (January 31st, 2012)
Reggie
had said that it takes some getting used to. Enough people liked version #1 so that he was encouraged to tweak it a bit. Thank you very much.
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timothydevine2 said 2123 days ago (January 31st, 2012)
Basstastic, Hot...Way Hot
What an interesting song. Deep and lingering sounds with the driving bass and incredible vox weaving in and out of the syncopated bass....great guitars to boot!
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Char said 2123 days ago (January 31st, 2012)
Reggie
is an incredible guitarist. I am quite honored to have my song given such classy treatment. Thank you.
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TobinMueller said 2121 days ago (February 3rd, 2012)
Interesting next step
The drumming is really cool on this track, but in comparison to the vibe of the some of the other instruments, it almost seems too frenetic, except for some sections. At times, it's either not the muscular hard rock sound of the bass and lead gtr or not the stead beat the floating melodic line suggests, In my ears, the melody line seems a tad random, unusual for the music bed. There are parts of this that are very interesting, well performed, and it is all well mixed. But it doesn't hold together for me. It's like an experiment that provides good ideas but needs another round of reworking/rethinking.

Thanks for sharing this. An interesting step in the collaborative process.
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Char said 2120 days ago (February 3rd, 2012)
It is
all subjective, isn't it? Thanks for the listen.
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tmcfate said 2113 days ago (February 10th, 2012)
surprizingly
epic in so many ways
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Char said 2113 days ago (February 11th, 2012)
That's
Reggie for you. He sure isn't boring. Thank you.
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Warren Smith said 2089 days ago (March 6th, 2012)
Whew!
Powerful singing Char. You really let it come out here - nothing intangible about that : )
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Char said 2083 days ago (March 11th, 2012)
Why, thank
you. I really liked my lyrics and then I was treated to about 12 versions. It has been a terrific experience to hear the music added by different people. Thank you for listening to the re-post.
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paul f. page said 2088 days ago (March 6th, 2012)
It's always interesting...
...to dip into your mind and your perspective for a bit. You have such an interesting take on expressing lyrics like this that is truly sui generis. The band is a very hip component behind you, perhaps a little frenetic against your vocal line, but certainly intriguing to listen to. I wonder if you could pull YOUR vocal up front a bit more. You've kind of buried in the instruments...This is truly original and I am glad I experienced it.
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Char said 2083 days ago (March 11th, 2012)
Hi, Paul,
I don't do any of the mastering. As I said, there were 12 versions at one time. The others used the slightly different set of lyrics I posted as an a capella. Thank you for the listen.
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ramonaji said 2073 days ago (March 21st, 2012)
your
amazing, instantly recognizable voice captures my ears every time! Cool music too.... great stuff here!
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Char said 2073 days ago (March 21st, 2012)
Hi, Ramona,
It's always such a pleasure to see you. You are a talented and supportive young lady, much more an original voice than anyone else. Thank you.
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tmcfate said 2064 days ago (March 31st, 2012)
well done
thats what i say. like your vocals the most and where they are positioned.
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Char said 2063 days ago (March 31st, 2012)
Gee, thanks.
The production was all Reggie Pole's doing. Unlike myself, he knows what he's doing. Appreciate it.
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J.A.Stewart said 2063 days ago (April 1st, 2012)
I Can't Quite Put My Finger On It...
... but there's something strange going on here. This must be what it would be like if Nietzche and Captain Beefheart got together for a chat. Avant-garde spooky and disturbing.

I hope this doesn't have anything to do with Chris Walken, Char. LOL! ;)


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Char said 2062 days ago (April 1st, 2012)
Heh, heh!
Joe, you made my day. Everything has to do with Chris Walken, everyday and in every way. I do not know who Captain Beefheart is but that is why God made YouTube. My second ever email about song comments. The world must have indeed tipped on its axis. You probably heard this before when it was on Reggie's page. Thank you for coming by and for the laugh.
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saturnismo said 2051 days ago (April 13th, 2012)
FAntástica
A big reflexion about the power of the recorder the time, the sound, the words, the ideas. Thanks.
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Char said 2051 days ago (April 13th, 2012)
I so
appreciate your taking the time. I liked my lyrics but couldn't ever have built this music. There were a dozen variations which make this one of the most exciting experiences I ever had here at MJ. Thank you from Reggie and myself.
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CIASM_ZENABI_ said 2051 days ago (April 13th, 2012)
intangible
I'm loving the groove on this baby. and I love the disjointed vocals and eerie guitar lead. Really dig this like of stuff because its so out there and different and creative. its almost prog rock in places. gear bass lines and keys. reminds me a bit in places of 80s Rush. great drum phrasing. love the lead break. one of the best things i have heard of mj for a long time. keeps moving and changing. a really cool enjoyable listen. cheers graham
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Char said 2051 days ago (April 13th, 2012)
Reggie Pole
is one (or two or three, smirk)of a kind. I love his stuff too. I'm so glad he liked my song enough to jazz it up like this. Cheers to you, too, Graham. Thanks.
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hongshan said 2047 days ago (April 17th, 2012)
Hi Char - intangible and powerful.
Such lyrical poetry. It's like a nice dose of pink floyd amongst many others. It builds up from 2:00 and pulls back -and pushes ahead again. The synth kind hits me with a certain nostalgia almost the band 'rush' comes to mind with the driving bass line.
Really builds at around 4:40 ish. Very psychedelic and then later hits a an almost bluesy sounding tone.
This style of music is very progressive and always changing. Totally awesome, kaleidoscope of sound and verse.
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Char said 2046 days ago (April 17th, 2012)
Well,
thank you so much for listening to the awesomeness that is Reggie Pole. I am very grateful that he allowed me to post this once again so some new people could here it. Thanks.
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karmicfreak said 2031 days ago (May 2nd, 2012)
How to Disappear Completely
RIffage like a Peter Gabriel jam, Radiohead lyrics sung with a Kate Bush-y feel. I'd love to hear more harmony on the vocals!
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Char said 2031 days ago (May 3rd, 2012)
That's
an idea. No one had suggested that. Thanks for coming by.
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lyzak said 2015 days ago (May 19th, 2012)
'Transmogrified'
For starters, I've never heard or read the word "transmogrified" before, and looked it up. Great word!
Expressive, dream-like collaboration. Lyrics are a bit haunting to me - raising the concern if I've left people feeling like these words. Makes me feel, which is what I need from art!
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Char said 2015 days ago (May 19th, 2012)
Thank you.
To make the word yours you must use it. I've heard the word since a child because "the sacrifice of bread and wine is transmogrified into the body and blood". Art and music transmogrify our existence into something more than common experience. Change, affect..good or bad, teach what we must learn. The lyrics were personal and I'm gratified that others can relate. :)
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lazyjane said 2004 days ago (May 30th, 2012)
Cool Song
The bass and drums are amazing! Very tight. I feel the vocals could come up in the mix, and maybe more of an equal control of the volume. You can try backing away from the microphone when you are going to sing loud, and vice versa. I think maybe would help. Nice job with this song.
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Char said 2004 days ago (May 30th, 2012)
I always
am a yard away from the mic. I don't know how to effect my vocals. I leave that to the ones who know this stuff. I sang the a capella as moved to do so. I'm always open to re-sing with direction. I'm a hack. Thanks for the feedback.
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Doadars Uncle said 2001 days ago (June 1st, 2012)
Smooth
Nicely flowing lyrics. Very kinetic. Wonderful!
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Char said 2001 days ago (June 2nd, 2012)
Hi, Doug,
I'm very grateful for the listen, comment and fav. It's only good because Reggie messed with it. Thanks.
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thetonething said 1984 days ago (June 18th, 2012)
thetonething
Awesome Char.You're performance is so free.I think Janis Joplin will be up there having a little smile.Like her you sing from the soul.Music has some great key changes.
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Char said 1984 days ago (June 18th, 2012)
Well,
for one thing, I'm really glad I was sitting down. Janis was someone who put everything into her performance. Thank you. Well, Reggie can do no wrong. This was the stand alone version of Intangible. Version number 2 garnered 11 collabs. So, this lyric has been my most successful and was a lot of encouragement for me.
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ktb said 1977 days ago (June 26th, 2012)
Intangible
imho it sounds like you went deep for this one Char. The music is off the charts and you stay right with it through out. I would've pulled you up a tweak in the mix, but your vocal is glorious here. When it finally breaks into the blues vibe around 5:45 you absolutely sail :-) Epic is very apt.
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Char said 1976 days ago (June 26th, 2012)
You know
that the brilliant music was composed after I sang these lyrics with no music. I really felt the words and I hoped that investment came across. Thank so very much, John.
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grah3am said 1976 days ago (June 27th, 2012)
Terrifying
I'm glad I listened to this during daylight hours! A great collaboration of voice and the late Mr P. (If only he hadn't gone rock - diving on that fateful day.) His spirit did a very good job remixing.
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Char said 1976 days ago (June 27th, 2012)
I actually
conversed with the spirit of the late Mr. P. He enjoyed offing himself so he could spring from the ashes a new creation with a somewhat reordered set of priorities. He regretted pulling this song and that's how I got the honor. I heard he was hot air ballooning. Maybe, he dove off the balloon into the void. It must have been an awesome ending. I'm be clueless about mixing. I thought it sounded great before, too. :)
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867-5309 said 1976 days ago (June 27th, 2012)
# 100
stylish unique and energizing -
what a Zing I am getting -
fab percussion -
and I am even #100 -
such a nice journey
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Char said 1976 days ago (June 27th, 2012)
Yes, you are 100.
In addition(no pun), Reggie's previous version had 90 downloads. With the current 10, that makes 100. 240 plays is pretty good, too. There's a lot of tasty things going on in RP's music and I liked how he manipulated my plain vanilla vocal. Thank you.
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Garni said 1970 days ago (July 3rd, 2012)
Intangible
Oh how did I miss this!
just love it all!!!!

G-)
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Char said 1970 days ago (July 3rd, 2012)
Why, thank
you so much. I think Reggie Pole did an unbelievably good job.
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Diviner said 1966 days ago (July 7th, 2012)
Great track
Solid psychedelic rock piece, love it. Well done
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Char said 1965 days ago (July 8th, 2012)
This is
one of my favorites, for sure. I love the music, too. Thank you.
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bud said 1965 days ago (July 8th, 2012)
This is amazing
Great arrangement and perfect setting for your formidable vocal styling and lyrics. Excellent!
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Char said 1965 days ago (July 8th, 2012)
Such a sweetie,
your budness. The formidable vocal styling is, no doubt, an accident. :)
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egobandit said 1965 days ago (July 8th, 2012)
Bass!
Man you Reggie rapped his bass around your voice following your every move Man he put your vocals on a nice pedestal , some excellent drums and guitar!
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Char said 1965 days ago (July 8th, 2012)
I know.
I think he really enjoys playing with my a capellas. And what a great result! Thanks, Tim.
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Cheeto said 1957 days ago (July 16th, 2012)
You had me...
at the bass line..wow...and the guitar sound is amazing..great groove to this song!!
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Char said 1957 days ago (July 16th, 2012)
Reggie
really brought it. Thanks, Paul.
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ste said 1934 days ago (August 7th, 2012)
very
late to this. sorry, busy with baby stuff. love that bassline. your vocals shine through
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Char said 1934 days ago (August 8th, 2012)
I am
honored, ste. Yeah, baby stuff is more important than just about anything else. It goes by so fast. Thank you from Reggie and from me.
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scaustrita said 1903 days ago (September 7th, 2012)
Always in great form!
Wonderful musicianship!
Tight vocals too...

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Char said 1903 days ago (September 8th, 2012)
How nice
of you. Reggie Pole did great with my acapella. Lucky me. Thanks so much.
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Damroze said 1875 days ago (October 5th, 2012)
Great psychedelia.
Reminds me of Amon Duul II . It's fascinating to hear your vocal development over the past few years.
Downloaded baby :-)
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Char said 1875 days ago (October 6th, 2012)
How nice.
I really liked these lyrics. Maybe, I sing better when I enjoy the words. But, actually, I had a cold and was coughing and was near coughing at the end of this. I thought I'd re-sing but Reggie used it as it was. This music is so cool. Thank you.
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Char said 142 days ago (July 4th, 2017)
Always love what Reggie does
with my stuff. Thanks, all.

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