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Doesent Seem So Simple (take 2 re-mixed)


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JohnnyV

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Uploaded: Jan 30, 2013 - 09:08:56 PM
Last Updated: Jan 30, 2013 - 09:08:56 PM Last Played: Jan 18, 2017 - 09:10:05 AM
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Trillian said 1752 days ago (January 31st, 2013)
OMG!!! : )
Dear Lord! Is that you SINGING!?!!! What a beautiful voice! And I love the lyrics. The intro sounds a tad 'off' ( a little tinky tink with sort of a tinny echo sorta Jimmy Buffet islandish (kinda steel drum sound?) Don't know if you meant it to sound that way? It needs to be a little more consistent with the rest of the song, because then the rest of the song just took off for the stratosphere!!! And I was HOOKED!!! Holy (Somthin')!!! WOW!!! Big Amazed Smile! And I absolutely LOVED the drums, because they sound REAL!!! (not computer generated) Also, the beginning of a song is like the First sentence, First Paragraph, First Chapter of a great novel. When you submit it to a publisher ~ If they're not hooked by those first impressions ( waste basket/rejection letter) serious musicians get bored quickly and if a song starts out a little rocky, they're "outta here" and on to the next song post. Gotta hook 'em right from the beginning... I apologize for the slightly un~helpful advice at least in the technical Garage Band/ Logic Pro area of expertise, but... "I know a guy." actually several here, who could help you out. ;~ P I'll be back to listen to the rest of your songs over the next couple days. Glad I had the patience and attention span to keep listening. : D
JohnnyV said 1752 days ago (January 31st, 2013)
thank you
thank you for the comments .. the beginning was meant to be different or at least "weak" .. it was my attempt at trying to have it "build" .. thanks on the drums ... I actually played Roland V-drums and they do sound pretty real ... and much thanks on your vocal comments .. I really appreciate your comparison of the novel ... it is EXACTLY what I was going for .. it needs help .. I'm a musician / singer but certainly not an engineer .. but its fun trying .. really many thanks
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Philip18 said 1749 days ago (February 3rd, 2013)
Doesn't Seem So Simple
I prefer the section which starts at 42 sec to the opening - I thought things got lost in the effects there, especially the vocal. After that, plenty of energy in the vocal and great tone to it. Strong backing that gives the song urgency. Good idea to include the breaks that you do - they work well. I might have brought the lead guitar up when it's doing the short solo a minute or so before the end? I like this a lot!
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JohnnyV said 1749 days ago (February 3rd, 2013)
thanks Phil
I may do that (bring the guitar up a bit) .. you are right about the song being a little lost in the beginning .. I just can't seem to "nail that" I know I want it to start that way .. light and wishy washy .. but I'm not sure I getting the effect I hear in my head
Check out my latest song called Doesent Seem So Simple (take 2 re-mixed)
perceptualvortex said 1749 days ago (February 3rd, 2013)
Really good work
The no-drums section, and then going into those great bombastic drums--that contrast really gives a lot of power to this song. The playing and singing is all great, I like the guitar playing in particular. Nice one!
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