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Paper Moon with Melanie Cholie


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 Genre: Ballad

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Melani Cholie - melody, vocal, arrangement, lyrics
Fred E. Jam - all instruments, arrangement, mix, production
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Lyrics
Walking thru this coloured day, splendid shelter
with my hands I lead the moon, made from lucent paper
There's no doubt, that I ´ll be cured
And my lips will find the right words
See the dark shade as you cry, it is written in the sky

Sailing on the narrow clouds, in the afternoon
Like a white dove you sent out, all my peace is gone
But I´m sure that I will be cured
That my heartbeat will ensure
If you´re blinded by a light, just pretend to see the night

Chorus: Here I walk with my papermoon
In my mind the poem for another little song
Sometimes hope sometimes fears
in the rain you can´t see tears
can be right, can be wrong
If you trust you are strong

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Song Stats
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Comments: 9
Fans: 13
Plays: 33
Downloads: 5
Votes: 0
Uploaded: Mar 12, 2017 - 01:49:47 AM
Last Updated: Mar 12, 2017 - 01:55:46 AM Last Played: Apr 28, 2017 - 10:23:18 AM
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Comments
Fire_Angel said 162 days ago (March 12th, 2017)
Wow.
A strangeness infuses this even though some aspects of the melody are very conventional. It's those amazing lyrics and the vocals, it's as if it came from another world and one I'd certainly like to visit. I just had to play this more than once which is something I don't do with all of the songs I hear at this place. Both parties should be proud of this! Thanks for that download.
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Vic Holman said 161 days ago (March 12th, 2017)
Paper Moon
suh-weet!
Melanie has a unique voice, very cool. great music bed & mix Fred!
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PeterB7858 said 161 days ago (March 13th, 2017)
Paper Moon
Another fine collaboration between you and Melani, Freddy. You two have a synergy that captures Melani's unique vocal style wonderfully well. The feel of the arrangement made me think of recent Emmylou Harris albums. Well done. Thanks.
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Moviz said 161 days ago (March 13th, 2017)
Melancholy
for sure Freddy..(Is the singers name a play on that word I ask myself.e. Melanie Cholie?)nevertheless a lovely song beautifully sung, played and mixed....very soothing I must say, regards M
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Calchas said 161 days ago (March 13th, 2017)
Nice tuneage
with LOVELY vocals from Melani. Soooo yummy!

Steller mix. Very pro!

Be well friends!
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KCsGROOVE said 158 days ago (March 15th, 2017)
Paper moon
A fine song with really fine vocals
a great mix
I enjoyed it!
KC
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Hickling_Stan said 158 days ago (March 16th, 2017)
Smooth
A really gentle listen and what a voice!...smooth as silk. It would be an interesting contrast to hear her sing in that style against some dark lyrics. Like the touches of strings. Cheers Mark
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Philip18 said 157 days ago (March 16th, 2017)
Paper Moon
Smooth, warm backing. Entertaining solo. Distinctive and evocative vocal. Impressive work, Freddy.
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jiguma said 156 days ago (March 18th, 2017)
Special
Melanie has a very interesting voice - lots of breath in the presentation, which I've only recently learned to put a name to. This is very well recorded and has lots of interesting things going on. Love the words and the little timing moments. The arrangement is very well done.
Great post - congratulations!
Cheers from Oz,
Neil
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Name: Freddy
Location: United States
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I have been a drummer since about 1974. I've played in bands, and in the studio, and I write and produce. I have been involved in online collaborations since 1998. ... [see more]

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A ballad is a story in a song, usually a narrative song or poem. It is a rhythmic saga of a past affair, which may be heroic, romantic or satirical, political (affected by the previous three types mentioned, refers to either glorifying the exploits o

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