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I Need DEMO


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 Genre: Acoustic
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For that special person that pulls you out of the darkness
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Lyrics
This long windy road that we call life
It knocks me down
I need a high
I'm stuck in a place
Where there's so much space
There's no love here
There's only fear
And I've got all these demands
That I know you can't fulfill
But I'm hoping you will
And you're no superhuman
But I need one thing from you
Oh I need one more thing

I need you to help me believe
I need you to help me see
All the light when the darkness comes over me
All the light when the darkness comes over me

So here I will say, from this very day
You're the only one
Who makes me strong
I count on you
Don't let me down
'Cause you've got control over my soul
And I've got all these demands
That I know you can't fulfill
But I'm hoping you will
And you're no superhuman
But I need one thing from you
Oh I need one more thing

I need you to help me believe
I need you to help me see
All the light when the darkness comes over me
All the light when the darkness comes over me

I know life isn't fair
But I need to know you'll always be there

I need you to help me believe
I need you to help me see
All the light when the darkness comes over me
All the light when the darkness comes over me
Don't let the darkness come over me
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Uploaded: Jun 06, 2017 - 07:20:01 PM
Last Updated: Jun 06, 2017 - 07:23:32 PM Last Played: Sep 18, 2017 - 09:47:53 PM
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egobandit said 107 days ago (June 6th, 2017)
believe
I like the doubled up voices, nice phrasing in the singing very enjoyable I can feel the hope in the lyrics I believe :)
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PeterB7858 said 105 days ago (June 8th, 2017)
I Need DEMO
Hi Niall. Good song. I like your vocal work, too, especially the harmonies. Nice hook in the chorus, too. Perhaps you might consider fine-tuning the lyrics of the verses a touch by saying the same thing in a few less words that might make them easier to sing and a touch more coherent? e.g This (long) windy road; (I'm) Stuck in a place; And I've got (all) these demands; (That) I know that you can't (ful)fill, etc.. Just a thought. Perhaps also consider singing a slightly different harmony line to the second "All the light when the darkness comes over me" to distinguish it from the first time round and punctuate the end of the chorus? Again, just a thought. I like where this is headed. Thanks. Take care.
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Char said 79 days ago (July 4th, 2017)
Hi, kiddo.
Pretty. Nice to hear that you're still singing.

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Name: Niall
Location: United Kingdom
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Hi i'm Niall and i'm 23. I originally joined Macjams in 2007. Remix of my song "In Love" done by Mr Turtle: http://www.macjams.com/song/44781... [see more]

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