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Im not perfect

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Anothe little song.
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Lyrics
verse 1:
You, can, say anything you want to hurt me.
And, you, know that it really does,

you, can, do anything to make feel I’m worthless
and for you i think i really am.

chorus:
Im not perfect but I’m beautiful
no matter what you say.
I’m not perfect but I think I’m ok
i just live day by day

and i wait, and i wait, and i wait this pain go away.

verse2:
you, can promise , anything you want
but, it won’t , make me believe you.

too, many, times i forgive you.
but, now, i, don’t think i can
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Uploaded: Jun 28, 2017 - 09:58:49 AM
Last Updated: Jun 28, 2017 - 09:58:49 AM Last Played: Sep 26, 2017 - 04:30:34 AM
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Hardware:
macbook pro, fast track pro, yamaha acoustic guitar, reno bass,
Software:
garageband
Comments
donalraft said 113 days ago (June 28th, 2017)
very good
Nice touch
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somoya said 113 days ago (June 28th, 2017)
thank you
very my much
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MikeRobinson said 112 days ago (June 29th, 2017)
Dunno ... does this musical treatment really fit the lyric?
I’m not so sure ...

First of all, in the mix, the vocal takes the background.   It is quieter than the music which is supposed to accompany it.

Second, the accompaniment is very ... flamboyant.   Percussion-hits in the high register, slaps in the midrange, not much bass.   But, in the aggregate, frankly distracting.   Is this music actually going in the same direction that the lyric is?   Is it actually supporting what the singer is trying to say?   Is this the best musical accompaniment for someone who is now being so brutally honest with his lover?

I think that the lyric is terrific.   But, I’m just not quite sure that this is the piece of music that should accompany it.
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ste said 107 days ago (July 4th, 2017)
i'd
disagree with mike above in that a juxtapostion in style with lyrical content can highlight the angst. the vocals need to be up a touch, though. Enjoyed!
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