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W.I.P. Coalesce 2


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Pie

 Genre: Pop (mainstream)

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Just got myself some new monitor speakers so have re-jigged this mix and tried out a new take on the intro/1st verse & chorus. Let me know what ya think. Cheers, Pie.
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Song Stats
Hits: 5565
Comments: 34
Fans: 23
Plays: 430
Downloads: 154
Votes: 26
Uploaded: Sep 26, 2006 - 07:16:17 PM
Last Updated: Sep 26, 2006 - 07:22:43 PM Last Played: Sep 17, 2018 - 10:05:53 AM
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Hardware:
Quad G5 Powermac, Digi 002 Rack, Ernie Ball EVH Musicman, Rode NT1-A
Software:
ProTools 7 LE, Amplitube 2, T-Racks, SSL 4000 Collection, SampleTank 2
Comments
Scott Carmichael said 4407 days ago (September 26th, 2006)
Let me be the 1st to say
absolutely great textured.. airy etherial beauty in the intro... superb
production...mix... soundscape.... beautiful mix... and the vocal
performance as well as guitars are exellent... this really knocked me
out...

bravo
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jiguma said 4407 days ago (September 26th, 2006)
Astounding!
Amazing production Pie! A little buzz in the silences, but only a minor
nit (I suspect that you're interested in things like that). Beautiful vocals
- no make that amazing vocals! Excellent pop song, great playing -
words fail me!
Neil
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eleveneyes said 4342 days ago (November 30th, 2006)
buzz?
i don't hear a buzz in the silent parts at all.

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ktb said 4407 days ago (September 26th, 2006)
I want more
Left me hangin slack jawed, jonsin for the other half!. Originality with a
familiar bent. Flawless recording. Wondeful songcraft. Hooks a mile
wide. Oh yeah, I like it.
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SlimGirlFat said 4407 days ago (September 27th, 2006)
:)
What a fabulous new mix. I LOVE the intro. Blended to perfection Pie!

and Damn! its good to hear a song from you again :)

awesome stuff

Slimmie



Pie said 4407 days ago (September 27th, 2006)
Thanks
Thanks for stopping by. It's been a while.

:-)



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I find your lack of faith disturbing
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J.A.Stewart said 4407 days ago (September 27th, 2006)
Getting Better All The Time
The pruning and feathering just keep making this mix more and more
professional, Pie.

Just a really lovely and finely-produced number.

I am... Pop-Pie'd. ;)


--- Joe



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guitardaddy said 4406 days ago (September 27th, 2006)
Wonderful !
What a great pop song !
Top notch Well done
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Einarus said 4406 days ago (September 27th, 2006)
Oh, yes!
This is cool.
Real cool.

Good writing, great performance and excellent production!

Now I'm just waiting for a version free of the "W.I.P." tag :)

Outstanding!

-Einar S.
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thoddi said 4406 days ago (September 27th, 2006)
Well...
...really, this seems radio ready to me, and it is a song with hit potential. You are now ready to face the crowds.
If you need someone on the tambourine on your tour, please call me;)

I wish you all the best.. You really deserve to make it big with your music Pie.

Awesome work!
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Bubowski said 4406 days ago (September 27th, 2006)
Hey Great Song!
Thsi is really good. Great production, nicely constructed, radio-ready lyrics. Cool change-ups and solo while remaining accessible.
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echoroom said 4406 days ago (September 27th, 2006)
Cracking
Fantastic production on this, everything really well placed and mixed. An
absolutely cracking track. Especially like the small pause with what
sounds like a belly growl before the solo.

Hats off to ya!

Steve
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j2morrow said 4406 days ago (September 27th, 2006)
Awesome
Very professional job. Great song writing. Wish you'd posted the lyrics.
Really liked the thick, heavy sound on the guitar solo. I wanted you to
sing a final chorus afterwards, however. It seemed to stop short of the
finish line. But a great job. Thanks.
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said 4406 days ago (September 27th, 2006)
well have to comment
excellent and tight, thought out. Bravo when do you get signed lol.
excellent intro to the lead my fav part
EMP said 4406 days ago (September 27th, 2006)
Pure Class
One of the best Tune I have heard on MJ. Vocal is totally great and the
tune just rocks.

Nothing to be said.
Great Great Great.
EMP
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DOCTORBIZARRE said 4406 days ago (September 27th, 2006)
YEAH
Nice slice man! Great production! KIller accent and great solo Bro!
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said 4405 days ago (September 29th, 2006)
Hey Pie
I really dig this version and love the cutoff on the guitars!
moorlandt said 4404 days ago (September 29th, 2006)
I love it
Oh gosh, I'm blown away by this, man. Just... amazing. Can't find the right superlatives. Just believe me when I say I love love love every second of this song. - Walter
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BranDaMan said 4403 days ago (September 30th, 2006)
Captivating
I'd be lying if I didn't say this was one of the better songs here on
macjams. Great skill
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Hectorious said 4403 days ago (October 1st, 2006)
Very Cool
This going to be a hit man!!
Radio ready..
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Ed Hannifin said 4402 days ago (October 1st, 2006)
Excellent songcraft...
You're confident enough to keep it simple. Just the elements that are
right.

You get a great guitar tone here...the lead tone is really nice, and the
playing's terrific... Great vocal, too...

Plainly, I don't have enough Pie in my collection...

Ed
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cchaplin said 4402 days ago (October 2nd, 2006)
The Dog's Bollocks !
Smashing !

This, for me, has become the reference piece as regards to production value.

But it's also a bloody good song, with a great voice !


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gwitherspoon said 4401 days ago (October 3rd, 2006)
Hey
I really like this song and the way it builds upon itself. Slow at the beginning and then picking up. The orchestration of this song is excellent. Good job.

I'm going to add this to my playlist.
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B.J.C. said 4401 days ago (October 3rd, 2006)
WOW
great production, such an outstanding song, gets better and better as it
goes on.
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TobinMueller said 4401 days ago (October 3rd, 2006)
Waiting for an ending before I give it a 10 :)
Wow, a perfect mix... so far. I really dig your lyrics. Such solid hooks,
yet a large vocabulary, which I love. The guitar solo is held back, big
and sturdy, unhurried, somehow just right. I sure hope you plan on
adding a tag or verse or something, tho, cuz I really want more to the
tune, and a bookending to the oh-so-fine opening. Perhaps you can
end with a repeat of the "take a look, I'm still here," with a verse
afterward? Then maybe a "and I search my mind" variation. (I like that
the song takes place as you are caught in this relationship, so don't
take my desire for a song ending to indicate I want you to explain a
happy-ever-after or breakup ending to your relationship dilemma.)
But this song is SO CATCHY, it has to be longer to make me feel
satisfied. I'd really like the story to come full-circle, somehow, without
falling into a trite romance movie ending, cuz the song is so great so
far. Gold, actually.
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Pie said 4401 days ago (October 3rd, 2006)
Dont worry...
...plans are afoot. Following the solo is a short refrain followed by an epilogue
(of sorts) played over a looping vocals on top of the verse accompaniment.

And possibly a repeat of the chorus.

:-)



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I find your lack of faith disturbing
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jie said 4399 days ago (October 4th, 2006)
cool
Got me interested from start.nice build up, great vocal,guitar at intro and still kept me interested when it started movin. Thanks for sharing. Cheery
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Schello said 4395 days ago (October 8th, 2006)
,-)
Pie x president =)
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Nurse DRE said 4378 days ago (October 25th, 2006)
yummy
well there you go - servin' up another slice of yummy pie ... love the new version ... fun vibe and tasty texture ... thanks for servin' up another yummy piece! :)
eleveneyes said 4342 days ago (November 30th, 2006)
version 2.0.....
is soooo much better than the previous iteration.
I like the new intro/1st verse better. Much improvement in the overall sound. Great song....so far...on every level. I envy your mature guitar playing and exceptional vocal delivery and production. Top notch. Another song that keeps you at the top of my list of musicians not only here in the mac jam community but in the entire world.....I mean universe. I wouldn't categorize this under pop(mainstream) this is much better than pop! I hope your gonna make it longer....please. When you are ready to take the Pie show on the road look me up please! I'd love to be a member of your live band. I'm totally serious about that.
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I. Spike said 4334 days ago (December 8th, 2006)
Words...
I'm running out of words to say how much I dig what you do...
Uh, real good
real, real good
real, real, real gooderish
Goodarandtastic!
You rock my brohta!
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Sista Mac said 4322 days ago (December 20th, 2006)
Really like this version...
Its nice and full. The guitar lead in the end is really nice! Great work and its downloaded!
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macgalver said 4289 days ago (January 22nd, 2007)
Ahhh!
Gorgeous! Wonderful texture, great singing. I love your voice. Great harmonies!! Fantastic, thanks for sharing this! Amazing! kelli
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peacepiano said 4041 days ago (September 28th, 2007)
Good Stuff
Just caught this on the MacJams auto feed. Sounds so good I thought I would drop by.

Thanks
Bill
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