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I have a crush on this girl who works in the post office, and I realized the reason why is because she looks so pissed off all the time. Also, I wrote a song about it. It's this one.

I don't sing or write lyrics very often but here I give it a go. Guitar is pretty slack-tuned still.
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Remnent of a cloud
Disturbed by the dregs of the sky
There's nothing that your body can't do
That we can't recreate on the fly

The way your eyebrows knife through the cold
Is the reason why I can't look away
Your hatred for me is so real
I'm addicted to the feel of the rage

You look so medicore today
That's ok because I don't really care
Your dedication's slipping away
Another person you just couldn't bare

But hey Mary I hate them too
Their habits all disgust me in ways
That I think I could explain well to you
If we could get out of the place

A deafening flock of crows
Descends from the overcast sky
And there is nothing that nobody can do
When the dregs of society fly

WE'LL paint this town a sickening brown
And together we will cancel the pain
No one will be able for days
Except for the sick and insane

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Uploaded: Feb 18, 2009 - 07:03:02 PM
Last Updated: Feb 18, 2009 - 07:06:02 PM Last Played: Jun 21, 2019 - 04:20:39 PM
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Feter said 3801 days ago (February 18th, 2009)
Man ..this is way cool ...I love live recording ..this has alot of feelings
very thoughtful lyrics ...great pickin with your guitar ...thats deep ...
Kudos ...thnx alot for sharin !!!
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Skean said 3800 days ago (February 19th, 2009)
I like it…Good playing as sung too…And as Feter, said "a lot of feelings very thoughtful lyrics" I agree.
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Skean said 3800 days ago (February 19th, 2009)
If you have time please check this.

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Relic67 said 3800 days ago (February 19th, 2009)
Good song
I really dig the lyrics, singing and playing on this.
musically, reminds me a bit of 60's british folk, like Anne Briggs or Nick Drake...with darker lyrics. Really cool.
Great post.

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SJB said 3800 days ago (February 20th, 2009)
A nice open tuning quality to the chords. A agree with Relic67 about the lyrics and style. Maybe a light percussion track and bass would make add a little more depth but it's great as a pure acoustic song.
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Char said 3796 days ago (February 23rd, 2009)
This is a match
made somewhere. ( I doubt, it's heaven.) Really great lyrics.
You look so mediocre today
That's ok because I don't really care
Your dedication's slipping away
Another person you just couldn't bare

Honesty counts. But, why such a gentle delivery? Lyrics like these could be screaming acid rock.
Thanks, Rev. Charming , you still are. :)

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apb said 3793 days ago (February 26th, 2009)
Paint the town brown ..

nice kinda sitarish effect from the guitar tuned like that .. I could hear this with some sitar in it in fact .. at some point .. s'all good .. well, maybe
a duff note at 02:03 .. but, what the heck .. the whole is the er .. sum of the
.. er .. parts .. or something :o) Great lyrics, cool, natural and honest delivery on the vocals and solid song and playing. Could relate .. I know lots of barmaids like this...
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