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Storybookland version 2


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garodaro

 Genre: Indie Rock

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I think this is tightened up a lot. Fixed the vocals and the guitar and some other stuff.
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Uploaded: Mar 31, 2010 - 04:47:23 PM
Last Updated: Mar 31, 2010 - 04:47:23 PM Last Played: Jan 19, 2018 - 10:16:25 PM
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Vic Holman said 2973 days ago (March 31st, 2010)
sgt pepper-book land
cool, has a sgt pepper quality and charm to it.
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ted23 said 2973 days ago (April 1st, 2010)
Digged
the first version. This is better! Love that "in the mirror house" line
So much going on vocally but its working so cleverly. There are so many nice vocal touches in here... "baby baby ,she lost her head" I think thats what your singing. Fabulous!
Parichayaka said 2972 days ago (April 1st, 2010)
cool!
Everything here sounds neat and original. I like the vocals, the combination of instruments and the overall feel and reverb of this track. In a strange way it goes great with the artwork you chose. Very evocative. Melody is catchy and can totally hear this during a nice retrospective scene in a movie, where kids run around in slow motion, carefree, smiling.

One little thing that I couldn't get used to was the panning electronic hihat loop and digital stepper towards the end - personally I'd prefer an old fashioned drumset approach for percussion, especially since everything else sounds like you recorded it with real instruments. very creative and cool though!
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michaeljayklein said 2972 days ago (April 2nd, 2010)
Very good!
Very good, trippy kind of song with lots to enjoy about it! Your vocal is so carefree, it's infectious! Curiously, when I was a child, my parents often took me to a children's amusement park in southern New Jersey with the same title of this song. Keep up the good work!
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garodaro said 2971 days ago (April 2nd, 2010)
Does it work?
I keep trying to leave comments to thank you guys for your comments. Maybe this will work? ANyway i am planning to change the drums. And I know about Storybookland in New Jersey. At one time, these parks were all over the country.
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Daugrin said 2969 days ago (April 4th, 2010)
Much Improved
The redo helped alot. Much of the pitch challenge is gone and I can dig the many ideas.
Thanks for posting this one, I appreciate the hard work you have done to tighten up this tune. Keep makin' um, I will be back!

Daug
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