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Wretch


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BlueLikeJazz

 Genre: Indie Rock

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New Song Im workin on. Just puttin up for some *hopeful* feedback.

Thoughts on lyrics, themes etc. welcomed.
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Uploaded: Dec 16, 2010 - 08:25:23 PM
Last Updated: Dec 16, 2010 - 08:25:23 PM Last Played: Jan 22, 2018 - 03:39:03 PM
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FEEL said 2861 days ago (December 16th, 2010)
It's got a cool hook
Great bed of music... A lot of potential and very current. Some great breaks, nice sounding guitars, enjoyed.
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BlueLikeJazz said 2861 days ago (December 16th, 2010)
Thanksh
I have a vocal melody planned out but not quite sure about lyrics. Any thoughts on a theme sir? Thanks for the words =]
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alackbass said 2861 days ago (December 16th, 2010)
Wretch
I agree with everything FEEL said.
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crissew said 2861 days ago (December 16th, 2010)
I like what you are doing
on guitar here. This would make for a great vocal bed. Love the groove. Drums need more variation I would say but a solid effort. Excellent, do you sing?
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BlueLikeJazz said 2861 days ago (December 16th, 2010)
Workin' On
Learning to sing. It is the most difficult instrument I have spent time with.
(In the future Id ideally use an electronic drum set instead of using loops.)

Its a rough mix, but I look forward to the finished product.

Any ideas on a lyrical theme?


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Catalina22 said 2861 days ago (December 16th, 2010)
Theramin Sound
You're on to something good here . . . .

This has a very indie, unpretentious vibe. I don't know; I'm thinking on themes and lyrics. Hmm.

By the way, one touch I really think is great in this piece is the use of the synth that almost sounds like a theramin of sorts. That element really gives this song an additional hook.
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KCsGROOVE said 2861 days ago (December 16th, 2010)
like it from scratch!
Good songwriting!
This one sure got potential!
Curious how it wil turn out!
KC
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Elevator_Funk said 2861 days ago (December 16th, 2010)
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sounds like something I would hear while listening to KCRW. So I hope that's what you're aiming for. I like the layout, since it's just a demo, I won't say anything about how abrupt the ending was. I have an idea for the way you should do the vocals, there's this band I saw in L.A. They have these weird harmonized vocals... check it out and see if it fits your style, I saw you were worried about vox, and I thought this would be a good way to do vox till you get comfortable hearing the sound of your lone voice....


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Elevator_Funk said 2861 days ago (December 16th, 2010)
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whoops forgot the link....

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=CqlSawc0ZZ4
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BlueLikeJazz said 2861 days ago (December 17th, 2010)
Never heard this band
But I really like them.

(And I am not familiar with that radio station)

And yes! The finished version will have a more fitting ending.

Im looking at a little over 3 or 4 minutes for the finished version. All I have recorded is up till the 2nd verse.

Thanks so much for helping a cat out.
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RAVENS said 2860 days ago (December 17th, 2010)
Cool
Hey, that pic reminds me of my bottle of Burberry Brit perfume.

What a great start & I do agree, you should definitely lay down some vocals. Sounds like something Bryan Adams would be interested in for sure. Kind of like the song "Run To You". Awesome, I look forward to the finished version.

RAVEN ;-)
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PeterB7858 said 2860 days ago (December 17th, 2010)
Definite potential
Have played it several times and like what I hear. One trick to get some lyrics that I use (a lot :-)) is to just mumble words that spring into your head as you listen and see what theme/key words evolve and take it from there. It is surprising how well it works. You might give it a try. I will play it again later and do just that and PM you later if something develops. Regards, Peter.
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BlueLikeJazz said 2860 days ago (December 17th, 2010)
Thanks
A BUNCH! What I usually do to find lyrics is ironically; mumble =].
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VicDiesel said 2860 days ago (December 17th, 2010)
Promising
I hope I'll catch the finished product when you put it up.
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BlueLikeJazz said 2860 days ago (December 17th, 2010)
Since I have your Username
I will let you know when I am finished in the next 2 weeks
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