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Feeling You


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giovanni

 Genre: Rock

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Hello MacJammers... Here's another song from my 2012 Feb Album Writing Month challenge. Back during FAWM 2009 I set out to write a bunch of tunes as part of a concept album I was calling, Future Man. Briefly, it's about a time traveler who, as a side effect of time travel, looses some of his memory and must wait for it to return. Seemed kinda cool, and I thought that having this "brilliant" idea of writing songs around a story would help me write more songs easily. Well... not so much. I only finished three tunes that year. However I had notes for a bunch more. This one - and you can call me a cheater - came from those notes. I had a couple chords and a few lines of lyrics and so for FAWM 2012 I decided to finish it!
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Lyrics
Open up an hourglass
and pour out all the sands

It's a second chance
but it's littered with double your demands on me
but you're not there
my existence is shaken, I'm falling

now I'm feeling you
I can barely hear your voice
but you're coming through
and you're giving me a choice
if I choose
and you're not there will you ever be?

You showed me east
you showed me west
and then tore it at the seam

You're forcing me to make a guess
but I just want to scream and shout
And you're not there
the answers are missing, I'm falling... I'm falling

now I'm feeling you
I can barely hear your voice
but you're coming through
and you're giving me a choice
if I choose
and you're not there will you ever be?

I trace the stars to where your heart appears
But you're not there
And I really need you now
I replaced the sand with salt from all my tears
I'll find you
Some place, somewhere, somehow

I'm feeling you
in every choice I make
and you're coming through
Guiding me from my mistakes
If I choose
and you're not there, will you ever be?
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Plays: 44
Downloads: 34

Uploaded: Mar 02, 2012 - 11:57:21 PM
Last Updated: Mar 03, 2012 - 01:30:15 AM Last Played: Jul 05, 2019 - 12:06:24 AM
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Comments
finkeldink said 2696 days ago (March 3rd, 2012)
Nice one
Rockin goodness.
Thanks for posting.
Much enjoyed.
Check out my latest song called She's Nothing but Trouble
Philip18 said 2696 days ago (March 3rd, 2012)
Feeling you
Full of energy - power backing and urgent vocal style. I like the chord progressions. Swirling solo is effective. Good one!
Check out my latest song called Refuge
tmcfate said 2657 days ago (April 11th, 2012)
big vocal
love the challenge...great vocal.. angry progression. keys kick in, rapid fire chord change works well. snyth line is a surprise.
Check out my latest song called Beautiful Rose
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Name: Giovanni Cipolla
Location: Philadelphia
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